smut snip

Jul. 20th, 2003 09:38 pm
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In response to [livejournal.com profile] gabbyhope's call for smut snips:



From the fic goddess [livejournal.com profile] ukcalico's Subversion (is there anyone who has not read it yet??):

"God, slow down," Dom breathed, when Billy sucked harder. His voice was hoarse, and Billy felt a spark of triumph.

Not going to scurry to Elijah just yet.

"I'm gonna, I don't wanna overwhelm you," Dom continued, barely a whisper, ludicrously tender, and Billy swallowed back a sudden confusion, tried to take him deeper still.

Dom's thighs were shuddering against his palms.

"--jesus," Dom growled, wrenching back, dropping into Billy's lap and kissing him fiercely, "jesus, man, I wanna do this right--"

Oh, Billy thought. Oh, wow. "Oh," he said. His voice sounded stunned, even to his own ears.

"No, no," Dom was muttering, scrabbling at Billy's belt, "no time, I can't, I'm too far, too late," and still kissing him, frantic he kicked off his own jeans and tugged Billy's trousers and pants down on the very next breath.

"You, ow," Billy heard himself protest, as his ass raked against the worn velvet of the chair hard enough to go warm with friction, and then Dom was kneeling over him and reaching behind and guiding Billy's cock to press up up whoa between his legs, and Billy choked the rest of his protest, "you not, hey, whoa--"

"you shut up," Dom panted, shifting impatiently and ignoring Billy's shattered gasp, "just, yes--" and then he was bearing down, taking Billy's cock painstakingly inside him, tipping his head back and snarling at the sky.

Ceiling, the pedant in Billy corrected, as the rest of his world dissolved, as frustration cannoned into sensation like the splash on being dipped in acid and then thrown in a loch. Dom's body was, was just, oh god. Hot as hell, and wet, wet inside, must've been doing something when Billy was trying to inhale his cock, and then Dom was lifting and corkscrewing down again, and Billy almost swallowed his tongue.

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Date: 2003-07-20 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gabbyhope.livejournal.com
That's the topper, right there. Can't beat it. Nope. Will nevah be done. It will always reign supreme.

*uses powers of the mind to make lobelia send cash asap*

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Date: 2003-07-20 04:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com
*send cash*??

What am I missing?

Oh, I'm glad we're sisters in Subversive-lust!

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Date: 2003-07-20 04:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gabbyhope.livejournal.com
Damn. Plan foiled. Shall have to regroup and try when she's not suspecting...

*mumbles to self*

Ohh, Subversive. Is it horrible that at times I'll just zone out and run images from that through my head? I'll be in the line at the post office and then all of a sudden, hmm, Dom and Billy on couch and wine and hand in pants and...

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Date: 2003-07-20 04:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheldrake.livejournal.com
Yup. Still favouritest smut of all time, I think.

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