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Title: The Desert Prince: A Fable
Part: 2 (Back to Part 1.)
Author: Lobelia; lobelia321@yahoo.com
Other info: See Prologue.

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Fascicle the Second

The hour of the first night cricket came and went, and then the hour of the first frog's call. For there were frogs in this dry desert citadel, and I marvelled at their song and at the soft splashing of fountains everywhere.

We spent the time before the evening meal visiting with tradesmen and shopkeepers, and strolling the paved lanes and alleys. And truly, I had never beheld such magnificence as I saw in the Desert Duke's citadel. Magnificent and fearful, both at once. The walls rose high and ten men could not have spanned their girth but each wall was topped by sharpened spikes. The windows were lofty and manifold but each window was barred with rods of iron. The gates were taller than ten men standing shoulder on shoulder but each gate was guarded by twenty-four armed sentinels. In truth, the fortress was a prison, and I was glad that we were only cloth merchants and only planning to spend a few nights in this place.

Yet splendid it surely was, and I trod the tiled courtyards in wonder and gazed in awe at the fountains in their lapislazuli basins and at the peacocks strutting under the lemon trees. I felt my lungs open out under the shaded canopies of those leaves and vines, and my thoughts refreshed by the sparkle of droplets on my face.

When the first oil lamps were lighted, we returned to our allotted chambers and readied ourselves for supper. A bath had been prepared for us, and I laughed with delight as I had not dipped myself in water for many a week. My beloved friend, my Sean ben Bean, gazed upon me and smiled, and he bid me undress. And as always, when we were alone, his eyes softened, his hands slipped like sand mice around my neck, and my heart stirred within my breast.

For know that Sean was dearer to me than love itself, and that nightly he made a shrine of my soul and of my body, and in this way he kept me sound and safe.

I undressed for my beautiful friend. My dusty cloak, my sand-riddled shoes, my sweat-soaked girdle, my tunic and vest and the undergarments next my skin, all fell in a heap at my feet. And then Sean took a step forwards and lifted his hands to the turban upon my head. He unwound the long strips of cotton, strip by strip, and as the last bands of cloth came away, my locks tumbled freely about my shoulders.

Sean ben Bean, my Sean, said nothing then, just took my hand and led me to the bath. The water was warm as baby's milk. Rose petals floated upon its surface. I slid into its silken embrace and closed my eyes as my beloved friend anointed my brow with balsa oil and bathed my skin with almond milk.

It was a service he always performed for me but when it was his turn to bathe, he liked me to sit back and wait. Under the latticed windows, giving onto an inner courtyard and hence not barred, there was a low divan, and it was upon this that I reclined. My hair was damp about my face and the scent of aloe vera rose from my lap. I liked to be clean and anointed for I knew that it pleased my beautiful friend, and I delighted in pleasing him as he delighted in pleasing me.

And know that it had always been thus but that as I grew up to be a man, our pleasures changed and my beloved Sean ben Bean taught me the ways of ecstasy of men.

After his bath, my beautiful friend came up to me where I lay upon the divan. He knelt down on the azure tiles. He wound one strand of my hair around his finger.

"Your eyes are like to coriander nuts," he whispered, "and your skin is as smooth as the hide on a newborn foal."

This is how my beautiful friend always spoke to me when we were alone. He always wove endearments about my head and wrote caresses upon my body. He stroked my curls and cupped my chin. He covered my skin with his own, and it was lovely in these lovely chambers, sweet at the sweet hour of the cricket's nighttime song of love, dear with the dear face of my beloved close to mine.

And as I lay naked and anointed on the soft cloth of the divan, he slid down along my chest and took my manhood into his warm mouth.

For this is also something my beloved friend liked to do, and he did it so well and so beautifully that the memory of it brings tears to my eyes even now.

He liked to stroke and soothe me. He liked to milk the weariness of travel from my flesh. His tongue inside his warm mouth was as the tender strip of loin cut from a goat's hind leg and soaked in oil, brine and musk for a day and a night. His tongue, soft and wet, stroked me to life and danced around on my most tender parts like... In truth, I could not imagine like what else.

For you must know that I had never lain with another soul, not man nor maid, only with my beloved friend, my Sean ben Bean. You will laugh but in these things I was as innocent as a wet-woolled lamb, and I knew no more than the gentle tongue of my beloved's mouth. Because this is all my Sean ever did. He washed my flesh with his dear, sweet mouth and he kissed me with his honey lips.

Nothing else.

For other pleasures, he visited the houses of the houri along our routes. He did not take me with him there. He did not even speak of them to me. He said that he wished only to protect me, to keep me safe and sound. He said that he wished me never to be hurt and to be spared the pain of need and betrayal.

And for a while, his wishes were fulfilled.

It never took me long to spend myself in his welcoming mouth. I was young and quick, and deep inside me a thin flame of fire burned. Yet always, before it had the chance to flare up, the milk of my pleasure doused its heat, and I sank soft and weightless into the cushions at my back.

My beloved friend brought his lips close to mine. Before he kissed me, he whispered, "You are my treasure. You are the opal of my heart." His tongue tasted of copper, honey and red wine, and of my own salty self. I clung to his shoulders. I was still trembling with delight. I twisted my friend's moist hair around my fingers until he cried out and chuckled and said, "Softly, softly, my angel." I bit his bearded chin. I tugged his earlobes. I wrapped my legs around his waist, yearning for more, yearning for something, I did not know for what.

~~~~~

TBC

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Date: 2003-08-05 08:44 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] eyebrowofdoom.livejournal.com
This is so Song of Solomon, I could die.

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Date: 2003-08-05 10:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com
Song of Solomon! Now I know what to go and read for research!

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Date: 2003-08-05 09:12 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] eyebrowofdoom.livejournal.com
You haven't read it??? It's all "my lover's teeth are like sheep", and other slightly bizarre similes, like the idea of beauty is somehow agrarian in its preoccupations. I presumed you were actively doing a pastiche!

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Date: 2003-08-06 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com
Well, I have read it, ages ago, but I hadn't thought to *re-read* for this. And obviously I'm pastiching like a lunatic, but kind of vaguely - not any one specific text. I haven't even read 1001 Nights! Or the Qran! And even though yesterday it did fleetingly occur to me that I would *have* to before I could continue writing, I then decided to banish that thought and retain sanity instead.

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Date: 2003-08-05 10:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freyafloyd.livejournal.com
I may well die from this yet.

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Date: 2003-08-05 11:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com
Thank you for the near-death. :-)

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Date: 2003-08-05 12:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brightest-blue.livejournal.com
Nnnnnng. Meep. *dies*

That is all.

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Date: 2003-08-05 12:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com
Thank you.

If this keeps happening to my readers, there soon will be nobody left!

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Date: 2003-08-05 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheldrake.livejournal.com
I refuse to die from this fic, as I want to know what happens. It's lovely and rich, like eating a Magnum ice cream in installents.

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Date: 2003-08-05 04:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com
Oh good, one live 'un. Heh. Magnum ice cream in installments would, presumably, melt all over your hand at some stage. This fic may yet do that...

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Date: 2003-08-05 04:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheldrake.livejournal.com
*puts on rubber gloves*

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Date: 2003-08-05 09:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mandalaya.livejournal.com
How wonderful, something new and fresh to enjoy. Thank you! No dying for me thanks, may I have some more please? *holds out terribly empty haremslash bowl in supplication*

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Date: 2003-08-31 10:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com
Thanks so much for your feedback! I feel terrible for not having thanked you earlier. This fb is so encouraging. *smooches*

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Date: 2003-08-06 06:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bunnysquee.livejournal.com
this is quite, quite brilliant, lobelia. i love how you are slowly setting up the characters and the settings and all that. rich layers of gems of descriptions. innocent desires and fatal secrets surrounded by true love and pure evil. quite lovely.

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Date: 2003-08-07 01:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com
Thank you for saying all this, you kind soul. I was worried that it was *too* slow (hence boring) so I'm very glad you like it that way. Because I feel I do need to set things up for when the plot starts thickening. AU is a bit more like origfic: I feel I've got to set the scene, get the surroundings right, establish who's who and their relationships among each other.

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Date: 2003-08-06 08:10 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
This is just so . . . extraordinary. Hi, I’m a non-LJ account-holding lotrips reader **coughpornaddictcough**, and you are one of the reasons. Your writing (along with eyebrowofdoom, cupiscent, azwewish, and a few others) picqued my interest in this fandom **coughsuckedmeintothepornyvortexcough**, and now I’m an addict. An addict, I tell you! More porn! More curls! More florid prose!

I mean really - how am I supposed to work after reading this. Coriander nuts! Newborn foal! “Tender strip of a loin cut from a goat’s hind leg and soaked in oil, brine and musk for a day and a night”! Who could resist? More! More! More!

Becky

I’m going to have to get a livejournal account now. It would be so much more efficient than trolling night and day for fic. . . .

And, sorry for the screaming above. My mental landscape this morning has been redecorated with sand, mosaics, and, oh yeah, Sean Bean's tongue. Mwump.

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Date: 2003-08-31 10:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com
Thanks so much for this feedback. I'm sorry I haven't replied up till now! I hope you'll get this reply, being anonymous and all... It helps so much with the writing of a WIP to get encouraging comments, you have no idea.

Thank you!!!

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Date: 2003-08-07 08:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ios-pillow-book.livejournal.com
What a fabulous fable! Just the story to be told, oh, fantastic teller of tales - on sahara-hot nights like these, under a starry sky, around a(n imaginary) camp fire, somewhere in the (urban) desert. Yay for florid prose handled skillfully (and yes, already the prologue reminded me so much of Song of Solomon, not that I'd be such a Bible expert, but still). And oh, turbans unwound and coriander nuts and opals of the heart - 1001 nights slash is the new black!

But I'm afraid, very afraid already: .... the memory of it brings tears to my eyes even now. Beware, the Desert Prince.

*offering cinnamon, incense and myrrh in return for this lovely tale*

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Date: 2003-08-07 11:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for your lovely long comments! And for reading and liking! I don't know why it is: I've been in this fandom for 18 months and posted many, many fics, and still I tremble at the beginning of each posting and am surprised by every nice fb I get. :-)

And I guess the hot weather at the moment has helped to revive this ancient bunny...

Thanks so much for the comment on prose, you are too kind.

Yes, and I'm afraid you are right to be afraid.

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