a narratological analysis of fanfic, part 2

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Part 2 of 2



A narratological analysis of fanfiction
by Lobelia

continued

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Beyond Genette
During the course of this analysis, I came upon a number of important aspects that do not feature in Genette's discussion. The additional issues that occurred to me in particular are: genre, character, setting, narrative causality and some structural peculiarities of slash. I will discuss these now.

Genre
These fics cannot be understood fully without placing them into the context of fanfic. Fanfic is above all a particular textual genre, and slash is a particular sub-genre of fanfic. (I am tempted to argue this the other way round: fanfic is a sub-genre of slash. But that discussion must await another essay.) When we interpret texts in the light of genre, we look for similarities across different texts (see Todorov). In a genre text (or a genre film, for that matter), each narrative component has a prior significance as part of a genre: it is not unique but is understood as an element in a generic formula (see Schatz; quoted in Neale, p.208). The formula is established by repetition and, I would argue, each individual text in turn influences the formula overall. In the words of the film historian John Cawelti, genres are a form of 'collective artistic behaviour' (p.2).

For me, genre is all about audience or reader expectation. A genre sets up particular generic expectations (I use the word 'generic' here as the adjective of 'genre'), and readers interpret each individual text in the light of those expectations. Texts can exploit generic expectations in various ways.

Both Border Town and In the Name of Research are generic examples of slash and fanfic, and even more specifically of Lord of the Rings real-person slash. A number of generic expectations are set up as a result, including the inclusion of non-original characters previously known to the reader, and the positing of a homosexual or at least a homoerotic relationship between at least two characters in what is generically known as a 'pairing'. The concept of pairing is absolutely crucial to all slash, and both Border Town and Research thrive on it.

Border Town exploits the generic expectation of a slashy pairing in a number of ways. I have already discussed the implications of the sentence His hand closes over your own above (section on perspective). The sentence, and its position at the beginning of the final asterisked ellipsis, depends for its meaning on generic reader expectations. Readers familiar with the generic conventions of slash will, I suspect, easily fill in the ellipsis with an imagined sex act (at least, I did). This is a speculation based entirely on extra-narrative knowledge to do with the genre of this fic. Slashfic sets up generic expectations of sex. Hence, even a non-committal statement such as His hand closes over your own can be read as a suggestion of sex to come.

More essentially, at no point in the fic is the 'you'-character identified as male yet, I would speculate, every single reader of this fic (excepting blow-ins from the world of google) understood the 'you' to be a man. Also, the entire fic becomes 'about' the pairing, 'about' the relationship of 'you' and 'him'. The 'you'-character's internal focalisation on landscape, weather, Spanish and a leafless tree strung with a frayed loop of pink chilli-pepper bulbs becomes the outward projection of inward emotions to do with his relationship with this 'him'. Indeed, the very first time the focalisor 'you' appears in the fic, he is mentioned in one breath, as it were, with his paired partner: At some point, this must have seemed like a good idea, you, and him, and a rental car...

One of the effects of Border Town is the fact that the 'you' and the 'he' are never identified by name. This is unusual, though not unknown, in fanfic (or origfic, for that matter). However, generic pairing expectations operate so strongly in slash that I, for one, filled in the anonymous characters with my own identifications: I named them for myself. My impression of this fic was shaped by the fact that I read it at the webpage cited above (see introduction); on this page, the fic appears without a Header. However, if you click your way back to the Table of Contents, you will find the pairing named in a mini-Header:

border town
melancholy and car aerials.
(ob/vm, PG-13)

It must make a great difference for readers, knowing or not knowing the pairing in advance, though for me one of the delights of reading this fic for the first time was the working out of the pairing myself. The 'you' and the 'he' are characterised so effectively within fanon expectations that I did not need their names.

By contrast, In the Name of Research identifies its characters very clearly by name throughout. Moreover, the characters are named before the story even starts: their names appear in the Header.

Headers are an example of paratexts. Paratexts are texts that are situated outside narratives or texts proper, such as blurbs or title pages (see Genette 1997). Headers are the quintessential generic paratexts of fanfic. They follow rigid conventions. Research includes most of the formulaic rubrics found in a typical Header (title, author, rating, summary, disclaimer, notes). Because the formula is so rigid, authors often play around with it, and Brenda has here changed the formulaic 'Pairing' to 'Non-Pairing':

Non-Pairing: Karl.Ur.ban & Harry.Sin.clair

This sets up two expectations: the expectation of Karl and Harry (named, identified, paired) and the expectation of something a little unusual, i.e. something foiling generic pairing expectations (Non-Pairing, reinforced by the use of an ampersand instead of the more usual forward slash). As we know after having read the fic, this foiling consists of the affirmation of Karl's and Harry's heterosexuality; this is a transgression only within the context of the genre and unintelligible outside the expectations of slash.

Genres depend for their meaning on what the Russian literary critic Mikhail Bakhtin called addressivity, the quality of turning to someone without which the utterance cannot exist. I would argue that this someone is the reader (or viewer) with genre competence. Addressivity or, in our context, fandom, is, of course, absolutely crucial to the entire enterprise of fanfic. Much of what is included in slash narratives is addressed specifically to members of the fandom and makes little sense outside the context of that particular readership. Fans, or more precisely: fanfic fans, develop a special generic competence. I suspect it is my own genre competence that keeps me coming back to Lotr-rps: I 'get' more of the insider allusions and that generates a feeling of belonging to a particular reading-and-writing community.

The category of genre is related to the fanfic-specific concept of fanon which I will discuss below (section on peculiarities of slash).


Character
Character is central to fanfic. Readers and writers of fanfic have an emotionally charged relationship with the characters in fanfic. This is magnified in the case of slash where each character becomes eroticised. To wordnap the concepts of Sigmund Freud: slash characters are cathected sites. Cathexis is a psychosexual charge of energy, the concentration of emotional energy on an object or idea. Cathected sites or objects are those upon which this libidinous charge fixes. I am German so I am not afraid of Freud's original German word for this affect (besetzt which means occupied, in the sense that toilets can be occupied). In English, the word suddenly looks alien and scary (also gratifyingly pretentious); it is, however, the very best way I have yet hit upon to describe slashers' relationship with their slashees.

It is no accident that the concept of 'characterisation' is one of the most discussed notions among fanfic writers (alongside the related concept of 'point of view'). Genette has not much to say about character. I therefore turned elsewhere for ideas.

Aristotle argued that in tragedy, character is made manifest through actions: 'Character [in a play] is included along with and on account of the actions.' (p.11) The exclusive emphasis on action is relevant for drama and film but prose narrative has recourse to other modes of characterisation as well.

The Israeli narratologist Shlomith Rimmon-Kenan asserts that there are two basic types of indicators for character; she labels them somewhat awkwardly direct definition and indirect presentation (pp.59-70). Direct definition names a character trait by an adjective, a noun or a part of speech. An example would be Jane Austen's 'Emma Woodhouse, handsome, clever and rich'. In fanfic, I am reminded of Jenn Abiding's wonderful opening line to No Soft Goodbye:

Orli is so in love with Sean he doesn't know what to do.

Indirect presentation doesn't mention the trait but displays and exemplifies it, in the form of action and speech (the Aristotelian modes of characterisation) as well as external appearance and/or environment. When confronted with indirect presentation, readers have to infer the character trait implied by the presentation. (Bal calls these types explicit qualification and qualification by function or implicit qualification, p.130.)

In the two fics analysed here, indirect presentation seems to outweigh direct definition.

In the Name of Research:
(a) Harry spit his beer across the table. (indirect presentation through action)

(b) "Ha fucking ha." (indirect presentation through speech)

(c) "I'll have you know my technique with women is foolproof, thank you," Karl replied with a haughty stare. (indirect presentation through speech and external appearance; however, embedded within the speech is an instance of direct self-definition)

Border Town:
(d) "Well then, maybe I didn't listen quite as hard." (indirect presentation through speech) The aerial zips and whines through the air as you slash at your insubstantial foe, lunge, parry, riposte; (indirect presentation through action) he watches you critically. (indirect presentation through external appearance / action)

I initially hazarded that the preponderance of indirect presentation over direct presentation is the case for fanfic as a whole (but changed my mind during the course of this analysis, as will become clear). Rimmon-Kenan argues that the favouring of direct definition is an aspect of twentieth-century fiction in general. These are her views:

'The economical character of definition and its capacity to guide the reader's response recommended it to traditional novelists [she means, 19th century and earlier]. On the other hand, in an individualistic and relativistic period like our own [she wrote this in 1983], generalization and classification are less easily tolerated, and the economy of definition is grasped as reductive. Moreover, in the present day, when suggestiveness and indeterminacy are preferred to closure and definitiveness and when emphasis is put on the active role of the reader, the explicitness and guiding capacity of direct definition are often considered drawbacks rather than advantages.' (p.61)

Fanfic would seem to in line with overall developments in literature. Border Town certainly falls within the bounds of 'suggestiveness and indeterminacy'. In the Name of Research is less indeterminate but characterises its characters mostly by indirect presentation as well. I therefore suspect that Rimmon-Kenan's speculation as to the reasons for the predominance of indirect presentation are somewhat limited. The love of indirect presentation goes beyond the love of the suggestive, and I would argue that indirect presentation can be quite as precise as direct definition.

Interestingly, one of the instances of direct definition I could find in the two fics occurred in the more 'suggestive' Border Town: ...he likes to drive, and you don't,... The 'he'-character's trait is defined directly (he likes to drive), and immediately afterwards, the 'you'-character's trait is defined directly (and you don't) but the 'you'-character's characterisation spills over into indirect presentation within the very same sentence:

He starts the car; he likes to drive (direct definition of a character by the character-bound narrator), and you don't (direct self-definition by the character-bound narrator), or at least not over here in unfamiliar towns, where the whole wrong-side-of-the-road thing bothers you more and every junction brings on a flutter of minor panic (indirect presentation).

(On the corresponding move from iterative-descriptive to iterative-specific in this passage, see above in the section on frequency.)

I found a few instances of direct definition in Research.

(a) "... I mean, I'm over 30 and a father..." (direct self-definition with respect to Karl's age and status, embedded within indirect presentation through speech)

(b) "Yeah, I'm a nice 'un like that." (direct self-definition of Karl, with reference to a particular act but also indirect presentation, revealing irony as a character trait of Karl's)

(c) Harry was too old for a white knight anyway. (direct definition with respect to age)

All of these examples of direct definition are focalised through the directly-defined character. In (a) and (b), Karl is defining himself, and in (a) the words I mean turn his self-definition (embedded in speech) into something more than description; he is in fact advancing his age and status as a reason for kissing a guy. The direct definition of Harry in (c) is part of a passage of free indirect discourse, focalised through Harry himself and hence an example of indirect presentation; the overall effect of the passage is humorous and serves to remind readers of the manly status of this character:

"Uh..." Harry looked around their usual corner booth, hoping to see a familiar face. Rescue of some sort. But, of course there weren’t any. Harry was too old for a white knight anyway. Would probably look rather silly in glass slippers. "Yeah,” he finally answered, deciding to brazen it out. "Hasn’t everyone?"

Ultimately, I am not sure how useful the alleged dichotomy of direct definition vs. indirect presentation actually is. In practice, I found it quite difficult to tell the two apart in every case. As the above examples show, the two categories frequently merge. Also, Rimmon-Kenan's duality is reminiscent yet again of the whole wretched show-not-tell debate, and one of the reasons for the alleged preponderance of indirect definition in modern (fan)fiction may be that this mode is more closely identified with so-called showing. I started out by thinking, along with Rimmon-Kenan, that fanfic prefers indirect presentation but the more I looked at these two fics, the more instances of direct definition and merged forms did I find, so I suspect that Rimmon-Kenan's claim may be over-simplifying matters.

Another oft-cited way to think about character goes back to the writer E. M. Forster. Forster divided characters into flat and round. Flat characters are 'constructed round a single idea or quality'; they are easily recognised and easily remembered, and they are not changed by circumstances (pp.73-4). The test of a round character is 'whether it is capable of surprising in a convincing way' (p.81).

I have two points to make about Forster's differentiation. Firstly, it seems to me to be very difficult to establish objectively where the difference between flat and round lies; in some cases it is clear-cut (Susan the waitress is a flat character) but often the dividing line seems to be murky.

Secondly, fanfic presents a special case. On one level, all characters in fanfic (certainly the most popular characters) are round, in the sense that each one comes predetermined with its own characterisation attached to it. As soon as the proper name Karl appears in Research, readers familiar with Lotr-rps will bring to the fic a whole array of possible character traits for Karl. Indeed, this aspect of fan writing is one of the most discussed among fanfic writers and readers, and is frequently opposed to the writing of original characters: in fanfic, you can rely on your readers having some knowledge of your characters; characters do not need to be invented from scratch. The cumulative characterisation of slashees within a fandom is part of what is known as fanon (as opposed to canon, the books, films, TV-series or real-live actors upon which fanfic is based). Fanon is, on one level, the fanfic-specific term for generic conventions. However, I think that most debates around fanon actually come down to debates about characterisation; reader expectations are less strictly defined with respect to story or setting. At least, this is the case within Lotr-rps; other fandoms, such as Harry Potter, also have fanonical plot elements but I suspect that even there, a greater tolerance prevails with regard to the twisting of the story-world than with regard to the twisting of character. (It is no accident that the acronym OOC or 'out-of-character' is an established ingredient in Headers.)

Part of the humour in Research stems from Brenda's characterisation of Karl and Harry as going against the grain of Karl/Harry fanon (as I mentioned above, their heterosexuality is not part of fanon -- although it is very much part of canon: both men are known to be heterosexual in real life.) Border Town also relies on readers' predetermined knowledge of fanon character. This is what enables readers to slot the 'you' and the 'he' into two character-shaped bubbles (I owe this wonderful term to Calico). Fanon and generic competence in the form of fanon knowledge is what enabled me to slot the 'you' into an 'Orlando' bubble and the 'he' into a 'Viggo' bubble. Even those readers armed with fore-knowledge of the Header (ob/vm) would still need to have fanon knowledge in order to enable them to de-code which one of the two characters is ob and which is vm (although the order ob/vm, rather than vm/ob, helps -- but knowing that the first-mentioned character in a pairing is often the focalisor is in itself part of fanon competence).

In one sense, all characters in fanfic are round (barring the very rare ones). Even if a character is not characterised in much depth in any one fic, the reader brings in-depth fanon knowledge about that character to the reading of that fic, anyway. In Research, for example, the character of Viggo is merely mentioned a few times; he is not characterised beyond his name. But that name alone is enough to conjure up a fairly rounded character in readers' minds if those readers know their Viggo-fanon. (I would suspect that no fanfic fan is surprised that it was Viggo who lured Karl into sexual experimentation, and not, e.g., Elijah.) And when Karl says, "...he's Vig, y'know", fanfic readers can nod their heads and say: "Yes, we do know!"

On the other hand, one could also say that characters in fanfic are peculiarly flat. This is because many authors, relying on readers' fanon knowledge, do not furnish their characters with much complexity. In many ways, the characters in both Border Town and Research are relatively flat: Border Town presents characterisations that operate within the generic expectations of an Orlando/Viggo pairing; Research sketches in just enough character traits to propel the kissing plot forwards. The problem with Forster's duo flat/round becomes apparent here: his terms are too value-laden to be of much analytic use (with round having a higher value than flat), and his terms are also too woolly to allow for precise analysis, especially within the context of fanfic.

Bal argues that the duality of flat/round only works for psychological narrative; genres such as fairy tales or detective fiction operate with flat characters only, and modernist narratives (e.g. by Proust) often mock the concepts (p.117). Fanfic occupies a peculiar spot between psychological narrative (with its valuation of complex characters) and non-literary genre (with its restricted stable of non-orig characters and its fanon).

Not only does fanfic rely on readers' generic expectations of characters, but also on readers' expectations of pairing. Indeed, in slash, pairings tend to have generic characterisations of their own. This is indicated by fanfic fans' development of short-hand notations for particular popular pairings, e.g. Viggorli, Dorli, Domlijah. The simple knowledge of Viggorli fanon already sets into motion particular expectations of a fic featuring this pairing, such as Border Town. It is this fanonical pairing knowledge that enabled me definitively to identify the 'you' with Orlando. It even coloured my perception of the imagined sex scene suggested by the asterisked ellipsis after His hand closes over your own. This makes sense in the context of Viggorli fanon which nearly always features Viggo as top and Orlando as bottom: His hand is here in effect topping your own. Similarly, particular expectations exist with respect to the Karl/Harry pairing; it is, e.g., nearly always a 'manly' pairing (while Viggorli is mostly a 'manly man/pretty boy' pairing). The fanonic associations of 'manly' and 'pretty' generate their own narrative expectations.

I have yet to come across a theory that is helpful in analysing the precise relationships between canon, fanon and narrative in fanfic.


Setting
Setting is not discussed very much by narratologists yet it is, for me, one of the principal ingredients in narrative. I remember settings as vividly as I remember characters, so I decided to devote a section to the topic here.

I have already mentioned setting a few times in the context of discussing other aspects of the two fics. I talked about the usual corner booth as a rare example of description in Research, and I discussed the way the landscape is focalised through the 'you'-character in Border Town.

Border Town makes a great deal of use of setting for narrative purposes. As we have seen, the setting is consistently focalised through the 'you'-character. For Bal, focalisation is the way a generic space becomes a particular place (p.133). Partly because of this character-bound focalisation, the setting also functions in a metaphoric way. Wind, rain, crap floating on the water -- these are not only parts of the landscape; they are also ingredients of the 'you'-character's mind. The setting is not an idyll; it is a mirror of the 'you'-character's emotional confusion.

Setting has its own fanon. In Lotr-rps, the most common locations may be summarised as: bar, flat, set, premiere, toilet cubicle. The setting of Border Town is outside these parameters but sets up its own. In the wake of rl information about the location-shooting of Master & Commander, a small sub-set of 'Mexico' fics emerged. Border Town is a take with a twist on the Mexico theme. (Usually, 'Mexico' involves Billy somehow.)

Setting entails description, and description entails a narrative pause. The descriptions of setting in Border Town contribute to that fic's relatively unhurried pace and dreamy mood. However, the slow pace is counterbalanced by the movement of the characters through this setting. Their journey makes the setting dynamic. The actual journey is also a metaphor for an emotional journey. The resigned mood of the first scene (you could go on, or you could go back) has changed into one of slightly more optimism by the last scene (it does get better, that it will get better -- admittedly it is not the 'you' who says this, as we have seen, but still), and this is echoed by an aspect of the setting: the dust. In the first paragraph, the rain, when it falls, dries dusty on the windowpanes; in the last paragraph, this image has transmuted into sweet bread dusted with sugar. A thematic link is set up between the dust at the beginning and the dusted at the end. The possibilities of emotional change are couched in the terms of a journey: the further on you go.

Mieke Bal argues that there are two kinds of space, frame-space (which stays in the background and provides a place for the action) and thematised space (which is an 'acting place' and influences the story; p.136). The setting of Border Town is a thematised, dynamic space.

By contrast, the setting of In the Name of Research is a fixed frame-space. It is also one of the most popular fanon locations: a bar. Perhaps because the setting of bar or pub generates a host of generic expectations and associations, not much description is needed. Readers will fill in the details of the setting from minimal clues (usual corner booth, wooden table). These clues are not given until seven paragraphs into the text (compare Border Town which starts with setting). Research propels us into the story via dialogue and free indirect discourse. Because the narrative in Research does not need to stop for any descriptive pauses, it is quite fast-paced, told through the back-and-forth of dialogue and action. Indeed, most of the descriptions that do occur are descriptions-in-action: Harry looked around their usual corner booth... Karl said, leaning forward, forearms resting on the wooden table... "Back booth, no one can see much." (See also my point on adverbs above, in section on frequency.)


Narrative causality
The simplest building blocks of a narrative are events, succeeding each other in time: x happens; then y happens. Many narratologists believe that there also needs to be some causal connection between the events happening: x happens, as a result, y happens. The drive towards tight narrative causality is especially strong in Hollywood cinema. Hollywood narratives proceed along a chain of causes and effects until all dangling causes are tied up at the ending and narrative closure is achieved (see Bordwell and Thompson; Thompson). Fanfic is not quite as tightly plotted along causal lines as are Hollywood scripts but causality nevertheless plays an important part, if only in the breach.

Border Town leaves a number of events and emotional effects unexplained by any explicit cause. As we have seen, not all analepses and ellipses are filled in; the precise relationship between 'you' and 'he' is not spelled out nor is their past history described. However, we do know that the 'you'-character's emotions are caused by some emotional trauma, that this emotional trauma has to do with the 'he'-character in some way, and that the motoring trip is a kind of therapeutic journey to deal with this trauma: safer, he tells you. As I discovered during my analysis, there are also other causalities at work: they buy bottled water because the water in the taps is rusty; because they are away in the supermarket, hoodlums are able to snap off the aerial; the broken-off aerial causes the mock swordplay in the guesthouse.

Causality operates strongly in Research. Very little is left unexplained and unmotivated in this fic. Harry is not really listening: this is because of his stupid allergy medication. Karl gets his idea of kissing from Viggo on some wild adventure, and he wishes to follow this idea through because he thinks he ought to have experimented a bit more at his age and if everyone else has at least kissed a guy--

Rimmon-Kenan argues that readers do not need explicit causality. We tend to construct causality from simple temporal succession (p.18). So if we read x happens; then y happens we will infer from this that y happens because x has happened. I tend to agree with this view. Causal expectations of narratives are very strong; we will always look for motivations, reasons, connections and meaning in narrative, unlike in real life.


Structural peculiarities of slash
The Russian formalist critic Vladimir Propp proposed that folktales are structured using a small number of components in different combinations, e.g. 'return', 'pursuit', and a small number of roles, e.g. 'hero', 'villain'. We can also think about fanfic in terms of a finite number of story structures underlying all individual fics. The most common of these is the boy-meet-boy, boy-wants-to-have-sex-with-boy model. (By 'boy', I also mean 'man'; and by 'sex', I mean anything from kissing to buggery.) This plays out in a number of ways:

(A) boy meets boy, boy wants to have sex with boy

(1) boy has sex with boy
(2) boy is shy / reluctant; obstacles and embarrassing situations intervene; a final revelation of mutual desire ends in boy having sex with boy
(3) boy angsts about his sexual proclivities
(3a) after obstacles and embarrassments, boy has sex with boy
(3b) boy does not have sex with boy
(4) boy wants to have sex with boy but other boy has sex with someone else; boy angsts

(I have probably missed out some scenarios but these are the main ones that come to mind.)

What is, of course, crucial to all slash is (A): there is a predetermined expectation that boy will meet boy, and that this meeting will result in the desire to have sex. No origfic, with the exception perhaps of gay porn, has this plot expectation built into it as such an absolutely integral component. If a slashfic features a number of boys, it usually becomes apparent at some point which particular boy will want to have sex with which other particular boy -- this is also where the 'pairings' rubric in the Header plays its part.

In the Name of Research is based on my model (2): 'boy is shy / reluctant; obstacles and embarrassing situations intervene; a final revelation of mutual desire ends in boy having sex with boy'. 'Sex' here comes in the form of kissing. The humour of the fic arises from the twist to this pattern. Readers expect the final revelation of mutual desire; what they get instead is the final revelation of mutual sexual indifference. The humorous twist can, however, only be appreciated (and the meaning of the fic understood) if the predetermined pattern exists in readers' minds.

Border Town is a type of plot that involves an aftermath of events that took place before the beginning of the fic. All the analepses in this fic are crucial to our understanding of the narrative as an aftermath-plot. Readers may deduce (at least, that's what I deduced) that the 'you' and the 'he' were, at one point in the past, involved in plot model (2) or (3a), perhaps even (4). This kind of aftermath-plot is not rare in fanficdom. It might even merit its own plot model:

(B) after having sex with boy, boy angsts about it.

Plot model (B) needs plots (1) to (3), however. It can only exist if readers assume that either (1), (2) or (3) (and indeed, [A]) have already taken place. In a way, all of my plot models could be rewritten as:

(i) sex takes place, boy is happy
(ii) sex takes place, boy angsts

Using this simplified model, Border Town follows plot (ii), and Research follows plot (i).

One could complicate the above patterns by inserting the component of romance. Indeed, after devising my plot patterns, it occurred to me that 'having sex' in fanfic is actually mostly subservient to 'falling in love'. One of the key structures in slash involves the various interweavings and criss-crossings of the 'sex' component with the 'romance' component. Much of the angsting in slash arises from some form of mismatch between these two components in the mind of the focalisor. In fact, coming to the end of this analysis makes me realise how crucial both of the components of 'sex' and 'love' are to the underlying narrative structures of slash. They are so crucial that I may have to write another essay specifically about this aspect (I know! stop me now). For this, my first analysis, I deliberately chose two fics that do not feature explicit sex of the NC-17 type. I think I did this because subliminally I already suspected that the inclusion of sex would explode my narratological analysis beyond the limits of this one essay. And isn't that always the way with sex...?


Conclusion
I hope you have enjoyed reading this narratological analysis of fanfic even a fraction as much as I enjoyed writing it. I don't know of any similar analysis, and I suspect this is because academics (who tend to indulge in this sort of analysis) have so far not taken fanfic seriously enough. A handful of scholars have written on fandom and slash but they tend to discuss fanfic as a sociological phenomenon and remain frustratingly superficial about the actual nitty-gritty of the fics themselves (see Alexander and Harris, ChristineCGB, Jenkins, Penley). I wanted to write something that does justice to the actual texts of fanfic.

In the process, I have learned an great deal about narratology (I finally understand all those concepts!), and I have also learned a great deal about the two fics I analysed and about fanfic in general. I've been delighted to discover that fanfic holds up under the scrutiny of Genette, Aristotle et al., and conversely, that Genette, Aristotle et al. hold up under the scrutiny of fanfic! One final point about all narratologists, though: much as I love them, they tend to write exclusively from the point of view of the reader and the finished product. They don't take the writer and the creative writerly process into account. Some even state explicitly that there is no point in discovering how authors work.

From the point of view of writers, this is a limitation of narratology as it has been practised so far. On the other hand, a liberating side-effect of the narratologists' bias towards reception (not production) is the blissful absence of any kind of 'advice to writers' or guidelines on 'how to write a novel'. This reminds us yet again that there are no hard and fast rules for fic-writing. Every narrative device can be used to good or bad effect but no single narrative device as such is inferior to any other. All of the possibilities are there for the taking, and it's up to each writer to discover them for herself.


Texts cited

Primary sources
Arabian Nights, The, translated by Husain Haddawy, New York and London: W. W. Norton, 1990 (first written down c.1250-c.1300).

Austen, Jane, Emma, London: Penguin, 2001 (first published in 1815).

Brenda, In the Name of Research, 2003,
http://www.livejournal.com/users/azewewish/126223.html

Dee, Ring Pull, 2002,
http://www.viscerate.com/manflesh/ringpull.html

Gabby Hope, Saturday Night, 2002,
http://gabbyhope.afinepoint.com/fics/satnight.html

Homer, The Iliad, translated by E. V. Rieu, Harmondsworth, Middlesex: Penguin, 1950 (probably written c. 750 BC).

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http://secret-panel.net/softgoodbye1.html

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Nova, Real Person Slash: RPS Fic (Table of Contents),
http://www.dombillijah.com/users/nova/rps.html

Secondary literature
Abbott, H. Porter, The Cambridge Introduction to Narrative, Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 2002.

Aristotle, Poetics, translated by Malcolm Heath, London: Penguin, 1996 (Greek original c.360-347 BC).

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Filmography
Casablanca, directed by Michael Curtiz for Warner Brothers, USA, 1942

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Comments

[novanumbernine.livejournal.com]

ooh, this is absolutely fascinating stuff (and i'm saying that not just 'cos you analysed one o'mine....). but i will need to re-read it quite a few more times to understand all the concepts... :)

a couple of comments: i set my fic in mexico mainly 'cos i'd been there on holiday (albeit not to the region alluded to in the story...), and i wanted to try and capture the feel of the place. i don't like generalised bar'n'bog settings; i like specific places that can be used to color the way in which the story is told (as you observe!)

i loved the idea that viggo's hand is "topping" orlando's. teehee. although i would like to add that the sentence before this occurs, "you expect him to reach out and snatch the wand of plastic away from you", qualifies the gesture as (unexpectedly) intimate (ie. you don't need to have the preknowledge that this is slash to decode what might be about to occur). but quite possibly, i was disappearing up my own allusive arse by that point. *g*

n.x :)

[lobelia321.livejournal.com]

Now that this is finished I can finally talk to you about all of this! Because talking to the author complicates things no end and narratologists never do it. But I find it fascinating, to throw the author's self-interpretation into the mix. But now I've got to go out (damn that social life) so this exchange must wait till later!! And the wand thing - yes, must think on it! *feels gleeful*

[lazulus]

Oh, I did enjoy reading this. Probably most interesting to me [although this is mostly because it's something that can only be discussed with other fanfic writers/readers] is the slash-centric section of this. As we talking about on Friday, as a sub-genre it is fascinating. I want to have more long, rambling dialogues with people about it!

I find myself with a sincere desire to request that from now on, everyone gives their fic summaries as per your story strcutres in Structural peculiarities of slash. Make things a lot easier, quite frankly.

how crucial both of the components of 'sex' and 'love' are to the underlying narrative structures of slash

Write it! Go on! You know you want to!

*cackles*

[lobelia321.livejournal.com]

Oh, thanks for the fb! And interesting about the slash-centric side of it: that got short shrift in the end; it had to, I think, because the thing was spiralling out of length-control, as it was. But I think I only scratched the surface of the slash-ness of fanfic and the peculiarities thereof. So you thought my structures made sense? *giggles about suggestion re Header revision*

Write it! Go on! You know you want to!

I know! I do! But I think I need a breather first. *phew*

[brightest-blue.livejournal.com]

Oh, wow. Impressive. I feel like I should get a grade and university credit for reading, comprehending and responding more or less intelligently. and you should get money None of which I shall do right now because I am high on codeine. Wheeee!111 But am printing out to properly read and chew over when I'm more lucid.

[lobelia321.livejournal.com]

Yes, poor you, I just read your post!

I'd be very interested in your response! I'd especially like to know if I've managed to explain the jargon in a comprehensible way at all. Me: I just adore jargon, and the more technical and outlandish, the yummier but I realise that it can get wearing for the unsuspecting. And it has taken three weeks of obsessively writing this analysis for even me to understand what on earth an extradiegetic homodiegetic narrator could possibly be. But now, amazingly, I do understand. But do you 'get' my analysis? I tried very hard to be very clear but it's difficult for self to tell.

[brightest-blue.livejournal.com]

Right now, I'm just revelling somewhat uncomprehendingly in the jargon. But! I have a plan. The head should be relatively drug-free by 8 pm tonight, at which time I shall settle down with a cup of some sort of therapeutic tea and read this properly.

[mirabile-dictu.livejournal.com]

Hello, and wow, and thank you for this! I've read it twice, taking notes the second time, then went for a walk, and now I'm back -- this over a period of several days. I still haven't digested it all, and doubt I ever will, but I'm terrifically impressed and delighted you took the time to write this.

Now, onto the specifics: I loved the structure you used to organized your thoughts. I found the "digression" particularly charming, both in concept and execution. No problem with the jargon; you defined everything wonderfully and consistently.

I had a strange experience reading it, in that I not only tried to apply what you were saying to the two stories you worked with, but to my own writing. Doing that made the reading more pleasurable, so thank you for that. In fact, the entire experience was a pleasure, and I hope you'll continue to post analyses to your lj, at least occasionally, and not only of more experimental stories.

However, the most interesting sections for me were where you expanded your discussion to fanfiction as a genre. It is a romantic genre and, I would argue, Romantic as well -- at least the stories I love tend to be set in New Zealand and Mexico, and could there be more remote settings? which I read as externalizations of the experiences of the characters. But that's my personal hobby-horse.

I was fascinated with your comment that fanfiction may be a subgenre of slash and really hope you'll write more about that someday.

I was especially appreciative of your attention to setting. As you can guess from my comments about Romanticism and slash, I agree that setting is as important as a character -- and in LOTR RPS, setting can be a character, whether it's the snowy fields outside Te Anau, the houses they rented in Wellington, the pubs and cafes they frequented, the clubs they danced and djed at . . . Each setting presents its own opportunities and constraints that shape the story, no matter which characters are involved and what narrative techniques are employed.

You conclude by noting that little serious literary criticism has been done in the genre of fanfiction; part of me rejoices in that. It's nice to pretend that I operate in a tiny, isolated, under-the-radar genre. I dread to imagine what might happen were more critics like Penley got their hands on our wonderful little world. I wonder if you share those fears, or are you whole-heartedly looking forward to sharing with the wider world?

Finally, you wrote Every narrative device can be used to good or bad effect but no single narrative device as such is inferior to any other. All of the possibilities are there for the taking, and it's up to each writer to discover them for herself.

I applaud this heartily. Every story makes its own unique demands on its author, demands that I think must be respected. I'm familiar with another fandom, to remain nameless if that's all right with you, in which sad, "angsty" stories are considered superior to happier stories. It's as though Dark = Art. I cannot articulate how frustrated this makes me. When I read and write, I usually (though not always) seek verisimilitude and, while it is true that in the long run we're all dead, in the short run we can have some fun. I don't understand why we can't be permitted to love and laugh and rejoice in our existence when writing fanfiction. You're right: no single narrative device as such is inferior to any other. Let's celebrate everything, as writers, as readers, and as critics. I don't think that means we can't be critical, but it does mean we shouldn't bring preconceptions to any story.

Thank you again. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.

[lobelia321.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for replying at such length and (omg) taking *notes*. That is so happy-making.

I'm so glad also that it was clear. Writing this was partly so that I would learn all those concepts fully myself. Having done it, I feel finally on top of focalisation, for example, a concept that had always bamboozled me up until 2 weeks ago. I've realised that I read and read but what I need really to *grasp* something for myself is to *use* it. Learning by doing, eh? And what better place to learn than the other passion in my life: fanfic? *g*

but to my own writing
Well, that's impressive. Because I have to admit that I've been a bit shy about 'going there'. I first thought I'd use my own fics to analyse but then decided against it because I feared I'd be too subjective and blind. And even though I now have all this in my head when reading other fic, I haven't actually *written* any fic since doing the analysis -- fear about knowing 'too much'?? -- and I've had only vague thoughts re my already existing writing. But it will be interesting to see what happens. I suspect it'll influence my writing subliminally; on the surface, I like to turn off my academic side when writing slash. The slash comes from a different part of my brain from the academe -- except writing the analysis gave me the kind of kick I usually get out of writing fanfic so who knows?

not only of more experimental stories.
What I liked in the two fics was that Nova's was experimental but Brenda's 'straight'forward. I think. She doesn't really experiment with style much.

fanfiction may be a subgenre of slash
This might come from the fact that I've never read any gen-fanfic. I live in a bubble of slash!

I wonder if you share those fears, or are you whole-heartedly looking forward to sharing with the wider world?
I am in two minds. For the longest time, I kept my academic life totally separate from my slash life. And I lived in dread of my little niche being 'discovered', and thought, how could I possibly write *about* this phenomenon, having gone so totally bush and native? Now having finished this essay I feel I want some recognition for it and have been scouting round for opportunities to publish it but remain worried about libel issues and 'being found out'. Even if names are changed, the strings of words remain googlable. The only defense is, I guess, the general obliviousness and uninterest of the outside world. So I don't know.

in which sad, "angsty" stories are considered superior to happier stories. It's as though Dark = Art.
I find it fascinating how different fanon pressures exist in different fandoms. It is very odd!

no single narrative device as such is inferior to any other
I was worried that I was getting a bit overly polemical at the end there, after having so hard tried to avoid any prescription of any sort. But I do find myself falling into rant-mode when confronted with the show-and-tell prescribers especially and anyone who tries to tell me how to write specifically. (Guess who's not very good at dealing with betas...)

Thanks *so so* much for these comments! *hugs*

[mirabile-dictu.livejournal.com]

Hello again, and I couldn't resist responding again.

Writing this was partly so that I would learn all those concepts fully myself.

I never learn more than when I'm required to teach something, so this doesn't surprise me. I'm glad the exercise helped you, but mostly I'm selfishly glad you posted it here first, so I could read and think about these ideas. I'd never heard of Genette until you started writing about him.

I haven't actually *written* any fic since doing the analysis

Ack! I don't want to hear this! I hope you'll write fiction again. Your stories were some of the first I started reading in this fandom -- long before I got an lj or tried my hand at RPS. Oddly, it was what I think is your only FPS that captured my attention -- I think it's called The Orc's Tongue, from Pippin's POV. Fabulous, amazing, and incredibly creepy story, very effective. I love it so much. Then I read the one from Dave's POV about Marton. At that point, I had *no* idea who these people were, because I was solely into FPS (I'm a very long-time fan of LOTR, nearly forty years), yet your story and characterization were so compelling that I've never forgotten it.

Um. Sorry to send you such a belated LoC. Heartfelt, though!

Anyway, I hope the not-writing-fanfiction is a temporary cessation.

I suspect it'll influence my writing subliminally

I can tell you that it's already affected my writing. I just sent out to beta a story in which I played pretty dramatically with POV, moving among all four of the hobbit-actors and then finally merging them into a kind of omniscient narrator, although restricted to just the four of them. I've heard back from one beta that it works and I'm anxiously awaiting the response of the other. I should credit you as an inspiration!

Now having finished this essay I feel I want some recognition for it

I completely understand this impulse, and you should receive recognition and credit for your work. I actually feel the same about some of my stories; I'm so, so proud of them -- but there's no venue in which to share them with a wider audience. Absolutely no one in Real Life knows I write RPS, and I'm not anxious anyone learn. I've seriously considered doing a find-and-replace and changing the characters' names, but then so much of the stories would be incomprehensible, relying as they do on background (and pretty in-depth background) knowledge of the characters.

It's a quandary. I wish you luck, no matter what you decide to do.

But I do find myself falling into rant-mode when confronted with the show-and-tell prescribers especially

You may remember this really caught my eye when you first posted it. I could not agree more with you; in fact, it's a real bete noire for me. That Nameless Other Fandom had more than its fair share of BNFs who were willing to let all us poor ignoramuses in on the secret of Great Art, the number one of which appeared to be Show, Don't Tell. Well, fuck 'em all.

God bless LOTR RPS, is all I can say.

Thank you again for a terrific essay.

[lobelia321.livejournal.com]

I hope you'll write fiction again.
Well, it's mainly that writing the narratological analysis unblocked my non-fic writing barriers and I got going on the book I'm writing about visual narrative in painting. And as I have children and a finite number of hours to devote to the computer... *holds hands up, palms upwards*
But I have, actually, been scribbling in my notebooks :-)

The Orc's Tongue, from Pippin's POV. Fabulous, amazing, and incredibly creepy story, very effective. Meep! Feedback! Thank you so much! It's my only foray into fps and I love getting fb for it because that story is a bit out on a limb.

Then I read the one from Dave's POV about Marton. At that point, I had *no* idea who these people were,
*laughs a very long time*
Because, you know, at that point I had no idea who these people were. I'd read a few fics by azewewish featuring them and that was about all. TTT wasn't out yet so I'd never even seen Dave. For this fic I actually had the bunny first and then scrolled through my list of Lotr actors (yes, pathetic, I have such a list...) to see who would fit age-wise and Sydney-wise. I knew I wanted Dave because he was born in Marrickville and that resonated (I spent my misspent youth in Sydney so this was nostalgia!fic in a big way for me) and I just needed another plausible person about his age. So I downloaded a handful of pics and that was the extent of my research. *laughs again*

But thanks so much for the fb.

because I was solely into FPS (I'm a very long-time fan of LOTR, nearly forty years),
Eeep! Do you mean lotr-slash or just the books? Because I read them aged 15 or 16 but then never looked at them again because they were 'geekish'; only retrieved them in time for the film and rediscovered what a fantastic writer Tolkien is. So: any fabulous fps-recs?? And outside of my fandom I really read only the best.


Absolutely no one in Real Life knows I write RPS, and I'm not anxious anyone learn.
So do they know you write fps?

I am having a creepy deja-lu feeling as if I'd replied to this comment before but as my tig doesn't seem to appear on the actual LJ page this must be a hallucination.

:-)

[mirabile-dictu.livejournal.com]

But I have, actually, been scribbling in my notebooks :-)

Happy news, indeed!

So I downloaded a handful of pics and that was the extent of my research. *laughs again*

When I first read this, I was stunned, but then I realized -- I read them as OCs and the story worked beautifully. So really not a lot of research would have been needed to please me; all I cared about was that the characterization was three-dimensional and believable, and that the story rang true for those characters as you presented them. Wonderful stuff.

Do you mean lotr-slash or just the books?

Sorry, bit unclear on my part. The books. I read them when I was 12 or 13 and instantly fell into Middle-Earth. I started a ritual of reading them at the end of each school year, which I have kept up ever since. I also find myself turning to them during difficult times, and re-reading certain passages compulsively.

I only discovered LOTR fanfiction a couple years ago, right around the time the first movie came out. I was stunned and thrilled. I have no idea if RPS had even been invented then; if it had been, I didn't hear of it until about a year ago. Never thought I would read it, let alone write any, but those LOTR actors are so charming that I was helpless before them.

So do they know you write fps?

Several people do, including my husband and sister. I'm very careful who I tell, though.

Do any of your friends or family know you write fanfiction? RPS or FPS? How do they take the news? I can't imagine confessing that I write RPS; as much as I love it -- and I do love it -- there's still something a bit creepy about it to me. My guilty secret, alas.

I am having a creepy deja-lu feeling as if I'd replied to this comment before but as my tig doesn't seem to appear on the actual LJ page this must be a hallucination.

LiveJournal has been very very weird lately, with comments appearing and disappearing, so you may have replied earlier. If you did, I never received it, so I'm happy you tried again.

[lobelia321.livejournal.com]

I started a ritual of reading them at the end of each school year, which I have kept up ever since. I also find myself turning to them during difficult times, and re-reading certain passages compulsively.
Wow. You are a real fan. Jane Austen is like that for me. Emma, P & P, Mansfield Park, Persuasion, Northanger Abbey: these books are comfort food. And I can almost speak their lines in my sleep.

I only discovered LOTR fanfiction a couple years ago, right around the time the first movie came out. I was stunned and thrilled. I have no idea if RPS had even been invented then; if it had been, I didn't hear of it until about a year ago.
Heh. I discovered slash in the form of Lotr-fps, and that was about a week before I stumbled onto Lotr-rps. And oh yes, rps was definitely around in Jan. 2002, *g*. And before, in the shape of Nsync and other pop-slash -- ah yes, the history of it all.

So when did you start writing fps? did you know any other fandom before Lotr?

[shalna.livejournal.com]

Part 1.

I've been meaning to read your analysis but never had time to do it. Now I finally read it and wanted to comment a bit. By the way, this was a perfect moment to read the analysis as I've got an exam on narratology on Wednesday.

The problem I have with narratology is that I'm not too keen on any kind of structuralism. It comes from my linguist background. With linguistics I've tried to keep as far away from generative linguistics and other strictly structural trends as possible. (I've been mostly interested in semantics and cognitive linguistics.) But I definitely don't know my Genette well enough to rightfully say "Ew, I don't like him." I think his concepts (like how to analyse duration) are interesting but I've never found much use for them which is funny because the can be used in actual analysis very well. Maybe I've just always felt that they don't reveal a lot of anything new about texts. Out of the famous narratologists I'm most familiar with Rimmon-Kenan. By the way, on the basis of his writings I couldn't understand focalisator much at all. (Which lead to failing my first university entrance exams complitely.)

What you wrote about adverbs, adjectives and description-in-action (great term by the way!) interests me a lot, too. Probably one reason why people might prefer adverbs is they can feel like a more indirect way of description and that way considered to be more like "show-not-tell" than descriptions like "He is beautiful" or something like that. It was a surprise to me that some people don't think adverbs are "show-not-tell" enough either. But still they are probably better respected that way than adjectives, just like you wrote.

Like you I'm not complitely in love with the whole idea of "show-not-tell". For me it sometimes feels like writing should pretend to be something else than written text (film especially). I am in love with written text and I'd love it to have a right to be what it is. I think that in fan fiction the whole talk about "show-not-tell" in linked with the status of narrator which usually is either one of the main characters or a quite invisible, unknown narrator (probably not even a person from the story universe). In the latter case the narrator is often quite carefully hidden. In that way the narration resembles a film where it's often quite impossible to construct anything like a narrator. Like you wrote, maybe many writers take their models rather from films and TV than from written fiction. I've often thought about this when I read stories from movie and TV fandoms especially. In those it could be that a kind of film-like narrating (~ showing) is valued higher than telling (but I agree with Genette and you that in the end text can only pretend to show and it does that by telling so why to deny it).

[lobelia321.livejournal.com]

I've got an exam on narratology on Wednesday.

!!!!! *is speechless*

The problem I have with narratology is that I'm not too keen on any kind of structuralism. It comes from my linguist background.
Aha! I love structuralism, of course. Well, not completely; I can see its limitations; it can get very technical and all those pages with mathematical formulae on them... eurgh. I suppose the people I really love are the Russian formalists...

But I definitely don't know my Genette well enough to rightfully say "Ew, I don't like him."
Genette is the last I read in a long series and suddenly everything seemed clear. This may be because Genette is such a fabulous writer and I want to have his babies; it may also be because by that stage I had read so much that, by osmosis, it was starting to trickle into my brain. I don't know; I just found him the clearest of the lot. But he does have his limitations, too.

Maybe I've just always felt that they don't reveal a lot of anything new about texts.
I'm coming round to the idea that having analysed duration, frequency and order once, it does seem not to be so very fascinating. But mood and voice do continue to excite me; perhaps he just harped on about the first three categories too much and is too caught up in detached structural analysis. This doesn't stop anyone (e.g. me, *g*) from taking these categories and twisting them into something containing emotion and erotics, though.

Out of the famous narratologists I'm most familiar with Rimmon-Kenan. By the way, on the basis of his writings I couldn't understand focalisator much at all.
I only understood focalisation once I'd written the analysis. I found it an incredibly tricky concept. And btw, Rimmon-Kenan is a woman, *g*.

[lobelia321.livejournal.com]

part 2:
description-in-action (great term by the way!)
Oh thank you! I was so pleased to discover that as I wrote.

But still they are probably better respected that way than adjectives, just like you wrote.

Oh no, they are not! This is the strange thing. Among fanfic writers (at least, in the discussions I've been having), adverbs are *reviled*! Bizarrely but it's true.

I am in love with written text and I'd love it to have a right to be what it is.
Oh yes, absolutely! I so agree! And i like that formulation,*g*.

I think that in fan fiction the whole talk about "show-not-tell" in linked with the status of narrator which usually is either one of the main characters or a quite invisible, unknown narrator (probably not even a person from the story universe). In the latter case the narrator is often quite carefully hidden. In that way the narration resembles a film where it's often quite impossible to construct anything like a narrator. Like you wrote, maybe many writers take their models rather from films and TV than from written fiction.
Yes, yes! I absolutely am with you!

[shalna.livejournal.com]

Part 2.

That would also linked to why indirect speech doesn't seem to be very common in fan fiction. Writing fan fiction is forcing yourself into the mind of someone else's characters or even real people and respresenting your own ideas as your chacteters' (like you wrote when you wrote about distance). I have a feeling that maybe this isn't complitely well-respected and that's because it's prefered to be quite hidden. Because real person fiction necessarily is mixing your thoughts with what you think are the thoughts of the chracters maybe it is considered to be better to keep these two things apart. Maybe readers would think it's sort of rude to too visibly state your own ideas as Orlando's for example. The quite unvisible third person narrator and the characters are kept strickly apart or otherwise the writer might be accused for OOC writing. (I don't know if this makes sense at all. I can't quite put my ideas into words here. This could also sound quite disrespectful towards fan fiction writers which definitely isn't intended.)

Do you think that zero focalisator isn't used my in fan fiction? I have a vague feeling that it could be so and again that could be linked to aming for "show-not-tell". The bond between narrator's visibility, (indirect) speech and "show-not-tell" is very interesting. I'd love to explore that more.

I've always been interested in paratexts and it's very interesting how important they are when it comes to fan fiction (ie. headers). That's quite different from published literature. Readers want to know quite a lot about the story before reading it (or even if they don't, they can avoid seeing the headers).

I've always thought that Propp's analysis is fascinating, but I've never read it myself. I do have read it being applied to things where it probably won't fit. I vaguely remember a truly horrifying business communication book where it was used (a Finnish one, so you unfortunately can't take a look and have a laugh yourself). Using Propp's analysis in another context than folktale (or even the specific kind of Russian folktales he used) is always tricky. But the idea of roles is interesting. I've often been thinking about what kind of basic plots and roles there are in slash. It might very well be that it is a pretty small group. (I'm beginning to sound more and more like a structuralist after all!) If you ever feel like writing more about that, please do! I'm sure people would interested in it.

(When I read what you wrote about iterative narration I started thinking about the relationship of it and the second person narration. I have a feeling that second person could often be read as iterative, even if it isn't necessarily meant to be so.)

For a long time I've wanted to read analysis of fan fiction as text, not just about demographic and sociological analyses about slashers ("Why women write slash fiction?"). I really praise you for writing this essay. The most interesting part of it for me was the beyond Genette part when you made points about what's characteristic for fan fiction. I'd love to read more of that. I've been thinking about writing something about something like that myself but never got around do actually do it. Anyway, fan fiction should be researched also as literature, not just in sociology. And it's always great to see someone inside the fandom research fandom phenomenoms. Fan fiction really is interesting as itself and it's worth to look at the texts themselves, not just the writers.

I'm too tired to write anything more that this though I'd love to. Anyway, your essay was a wonderful way to revise for my exam and very interesting to read.

Oh and please write about fanfic as sub-genre of slash sometime! That would be interesting, I'm sure.

[shalna.livejournal.com]

(When I read what you wrote about iterative narration I started thinking about the relationship of it and the second person narration. I have a feeling that second person could often be read as iterative, even if it isn't necessarily meant to be so.)
This was supposed to be a comment for myself, something to think about later. Obviously I forgot to take if off from the comment. Also I see I really should have proof-read :( I hope you can figure out what I mean inspite of spelling errors and wrong words.

[lobelia321.livejournal.com]

Maybe readers would think it's sort of rude to too visibly state your own ideas as Orlando's for example. The quite unvisible third person narrator and the characters are kept strickly apart or otherwise the writer might be accused for OOC writing.
Yes, this was one of the interesting things to discover: the peculiarity of slash and how slash interacts with more general trends in fiction-writing but also has its own particular passions and agendas.

That's quite different from published literature.
I'm not sure it is. Headers are a very *particular* form of paratexts but books, e.g., depend absolutely on their titles and the names of their authors on the cover, and on the picture on the cover, even (well, for me that's crucial, anyhow, *g*) -- which isn't so much a para*text* as a para*picture* or something else...

And Propp as a business advisor! *falls over*
Yes, and one of these days I'll write about the specifically sexual ways of writing in slash. Because that was sort of left to one side in my analysis. But I have a suspicion it could throw up some really interesting insights.

For a long time I've wanted to read analysis of fan fiction as text, not just about demographic and sociological analyses about slashers ("Why women write slash fiction?"). I really praise you for writing this essay.
Oh thank you so much! Because I, too, have been getting bored with the 'ooh, women writing porn' angle adopted by the academic writers I've found. Nobody takes the *writing* seriously! And I do! We all do! That's part of the reason we're slashers and not just 'fans'! And on another level, the very existence of fanfic - no profit, limited fame, just doing it for the love of it - seems to be vindicating all those narratologists who grandly claim that 'narrative is everywhere'. It's true: it really is. And something *drives* it; there's an impulse to write stories that has nothing to do with wanting to be a published author. It's sort of selflessly interested in the thing itself.

I've been thinking about writing something about something like that myself but never got around do actually do it.
Oh do!