lobelia321: (Default)
[personal profile] lobelia321
I am still reading Genette. I read one chapter, I summarise it, and then I apply his ideas to two slash fics, one by [livejournal.com profile] azewewish and one by [livejournal.com profile] novanumbernine. It is tremendous fun, and I'm learning heaps, both about narrative and about fic.

Here's another reason why I love Genette. On p. 198, he writes:

Narrative always says less than it knows, but it often makes known more than it says.

My reading of this:

Says less than it knows: narrator always knows more than what is written on the page. It's the tip of the iceberg principle, which I have often discussed with [livejournal.com profile] azewewish and others.

Makes known more than it says: much is implied. As readers, we complete unfinished sentences, fill in ellipses, understand the import of someone's words or actions (he turned away without a word) even when the main character doesn't, and so forth. It is, for example, the wonderful (and difficult, as I'm finding) challenge of first-person pov: sometimes the "I" doesn't get something or misconstrues things, but we, the readers, are clued in -- how to make known more than is actually on the page: one of the wonders of fic.

Give me a few more days and I'll have this narratological analysis of fanfic ready and posted!

I also must, simply must, finish Boring!Orli...

(no subject)

Date: 2004-02-22 11:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jayest.livejournal.com
I'm very interested to see the outcome of the two fics that you're analysing - sounds interesting.

I read Boring!Orli for the first time about a week ago - you simply MUST continue...

Re:

Date: 2004-02-22 11:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com
You read B!O and didn't fb??? *sobs uncontrollably for an hour and 23 minutes*

Re:

Date: 2004-02-23 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jayest.livejournal.com
One hour and 23 minutes?
*frantically tries to think up some feedback*

Um, it was good?

(no subject)

Date: 2004-02-22 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheldrake.livejournal.com
Hm. Veeery interesting. Thank you for posting bits of another website in my LJ, btw. It was very effective, but unfortunately seems to mean I can't reply to your comment. Anyway, here is a snippet of the fic. As you can see, I have tried to pay attention to Genette's theories:


Madonna checked her email again. Nothing. She sipped her Evian and stared out of the window. Outside, the bland Californian sun beat down, slowly frying the garden to a crisp.

There seemed to be something stuck in her eye.

Bitches.

Why wouldn't Ents call each other 'Babe', anyway?




Re:

Date: 2004-02-23 12:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com
Bwuahahah.... *starts to laugh uproariously but laugh gets stuck in throat half-way through*

*falls over*

Yes. I see that you have interpreted Genette to mean 'make the reader work really hard at filling in the gaps.'

Madonna! Ents! Somehow and perversely, I need more. Especially more of that "bland" (nice word!) sunshine.

I love the way hi-falutin' narratological theory and fanfic converges! Here we were all thinking we were just a bunch of pornographers and all the time we were being neo-Aristotelian narratrixes!!!!

Re:

Date: 2004-02-23 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheldrake.livejournal.com
But I've always thought of myself as a neo-Aristotelian narratrix!

Re:

Date: 2004-02-23 02:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com
Whoops.

The dangers of attributing to others the meanderings of one's own primitive mind...

Re:

Date: 2004-02-23 12:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobelia321.livejournal.com
But you did put it behind a cut!!

Re:

Date: 2004-02-23 12:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheldrake.livejournal.com
Hmm, you're right. I may have to remedy that.

*waves hi to Karl*

Profile

lobelia321: (Default)
Lobelia the adverbially eclectic

January 2026

S M T W T F S
    1 23
45678910
11121314151617
18192021222324
25262728293031

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags